Bass video Help

[Crankbait]

Hey guys I’m trying to do a video for a buddy that guides. I put together a little video from me fishing and wanted to get opinions and suggestions about video, editing, ect. Now with that being said don’t laugh too hard at my fish or my boat. Filmed in NC and we don’t have the Hawgs ya’ll do. Also as stated in my reel videos I’m the original poor angler. Was about to buy a boat and trade in my car for a truck but got married and now have 3 step children……had to buy a house, pay for football camp, band camp, cheerleading and on and on so I had to rig a boat up to get me on the water. I did win two tournaments fishing against the big boys in their Nitros and Rangers. Also I was new to bass fishing and back then didn’t know the proper handling of a bass….watched too many Elites yanking the bass up by their jaws and not supporting their bodies. I know better now! But tell me what I could do on the video. Any advice is appreciated. Thanks
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6vIR7tGU-VA